Thursday, 27 October 2011

9 Poems for Halloween

5. Vampires

With
Vampires it
Transpires that on
Fangs they
Hang small
Specks from torn
Necks where
Blood like a
Flood leaves
Dots as the
Spots of death's
Pith

7 comments:

  1. Do
    Ghouls attend
    Schools where they
    Learn how to
    Turn our
    Dreams into
    Screams while
    Floating and.
    Gloating with
    Silent yet
    Violent
    Intent?

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  2. Not brilliant, I know-but thought I'd give it a go! The full stop after "and" is a weird typo that wasn't on the original post. I think the ghouls have been up to mischief!!!

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  3. Well done young lady! And, spookily, tomorrow's [well, later today's] post is 'Ghoul'!! Now, to keep the rhyme scheme wholly consistent, how about starting with 'Will' and end with 'kills'?

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  4. Will work on a new version. I have to admit I didn't check the rhyme pattern as fully as I could have!!! Oh and I like the " young lady" bit...

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  5. Will
    Spectres have
    Lectures on
    Spooking and
    Cooking up
    Ghoulish ideas for their
    Foolish careers in
    Haunting,while
    Flaunting exceedingly
    Horrid, unpleasantly
    Torrid ambitions to
    Kill...
    He he! A quick attempt to rhyme at start and end-but not sure if the rest works!

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