Sunday 18 March 2012

Hitchhiker


As I round the curve to the open road

I catch her come-on thumb in the distance
and my thoughts begin to assess every possibility.

The approach is a targeting, homing in on those things that tell me
where she’s been, what chit-chat is liked and the music she listens to;

her hair will have the smell of a bedroom shared with another:
there in the dark curls, there in the lovelock across her eye, and

her long legs have walked the whole mile to this place at the roadside -
all of this is in a clear outline because I’ve seen it a thousand times.

Getting closer, I can taste cigarettes and red wine;
the chocolate she licked from fingers at breakfast after making love.

I know how later on she will rest her head on my shoulder
pretending to fall asleep, and I will look down at her tired, tangled legs

then back to curves along the open road.

3 comments:

  1. Intriguing. Enigmatic. Evokes a sense of the free spirit, I think?

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  2. She sounds like a girl with an interesting life. I wonder what the rest of her story mIght be, therefore successful storytelling indeed!

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